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For =IzzyWinkle's contest.

Her OC Pinkie (An Ipod) and my OC Enixe (A PSP)

Took me a while, and look - a proper background! ^^

Pinkie and Enixe meeting in a park, and I don't think they have the best first meeting. Enixe is a little frightened by there being so much pink in one place. But hopefully, they'll get on better soon! Also, I keep drawing robots, so I can avoid drawing hands XP.

Thanks to ~DevilsHaart for helping me with the psp button colours.

Oh, and critique would be loved!

Pinkie (c) :iconizzywinkle:
Enixe (c) :iconphoneix-faerie:

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:icondevilshaart:
ah it looks so cool now its coloured! love enixe's hair colours, they're so cool :0 and i'd be scared about there being so much pink in one place >.>

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hehe aww thank you! and me as well. He's just...a little dazed..

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Wha---at. You have to be a suscriber to crit, too? -sigh- xDD;

Okay, I'll do it here.

first of all, you've improved so much it's amazing! ^^ Pinky looks adorable. The expressions are also very good. ^^

As for critiques, I'd say that you need to practive hands. xDD I know you're using the robot excuse, which actually isn't a bad excuse, but the only way you can get good at drawing hands is by practicing a lot.

Also, the background looks kind of strange. Try sketching it first, or do lineart for the background. ^^

Hope I helped! xDD

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8D OMG! SOOOOOO CUTE X3 omg jenni i lovvvvveee it |D it came out sooo cute hun X3 nice job~ they both look great~

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I thought Pinkie was shorter? *BUZZ! Deviant-alert! Take away the insurbodinate!* What? No! Wait! AAAAA---!


*krhm* Okay, so, the head on Pinkie looks a bit odd, but you're definitely improving on that. The limbs look not-so-much realistic yet, more like fragile sticks, but that's to be expected from the start. I'm sure you'll improve!

Hope you win! ^-^

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hehe XD i dunno how tall pinkie is - first time ive drawn Enixe, so cant compare. Thank you. what bit of the headlooks wrong? I'd like to know. And yeh, i see what you mean about the limbs - but they are both quite thin . Thank you

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aww thank you :D glad you commented!

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yeh, im sorry! Oki, thank you very much! yeh..hands are evil. I am trying to improve, but its just easier to make the robots! *slaps self* I'll try not to do it in fture.

Thank you! i'll try that, i did do it as i coloured, which is probably a bad idea! you did help! *hugs* thank you!

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Well Pinkie's head can't seem to retain a very realistic roundness.

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